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Biting

00:17 Apr 16 2007
Times Read: 724


Warning: Adult material in the following story.











She looks over at him and says, “Hmm, don’t bite too hard...my throat is already sore.....and you might catch something.” She grins at him slightly.



He replies, “Who said I was biting your neck?”



“Oh well... in that case, nibble away.” She says as she extends her toes further toward him.



He moves her leg onto his shoulder and bites hard.



”Ouch not too hard now.” She says as she jerks her leg back a bit.



“It's only your thigh baby,” he mumbles as he kisses the spot he just bit.



She giggles as she says, “I like the ILLUSION of pain not the real stuff.. .....nibbles..please...not real bites.”



“Ssshhh, girl!” he says in a low deep voice as he looks at her with quiet authority in his eyes.



She quiets and lets you nibble on up her leg.”



“Mmm” he moans as he nips and licks his way up her inner thigh.



By this time she is having trouble holding her drink still while he nibbles.



He moves to nibble on her pussy lips. Folding her leg across his shoulder, he holds her open to him.



She really is wiggling a bit now and leans over and sets the drink down.



He glances up and smiles, “You like this girl?”



She looks down and says, “What girl in her right mind wouldn't????”



He stops what he is doing and looks up at her, “Those that like to control... and don’t like to lose their own”.



She smiles softly and said, “I have played both sides...losing control isn’t so bad.”



He looks at her solemnly and says, “Being Dom is where it's at.”



”It has its good points as well. There is a bit more responsibility though.”



He nods in agreement and says, “But women are better as Subs.”



She looks up innocently at him, “Oh I don’t know.....males can take a bit more i think.”



“Woman tries to raise the beast by being argumentative.” He growls at her.



She grins wickedly, “Not arguing stating a thought.” But she quiets down and makes a motion of buttoning her lips.



“You will not dominate me pet.” He states in a quiet authoritative voice.



“Not trying, shushed remember?” she whispers.



“Good slave” he says.



She grins.......”Whatever you say” and thinks to herself…..for now.



He smiles a sexy knowing smile and says, “You will see.”



She looks up and just HAS to say, “I am not very good at STAYing submissive.....but can for now.” And grins.



”I can help there.” He says to her.



"Hhmmm but that might spoil my Domme times.” She mumbles at him.



He just laughs heartily at her.



Grinning from ear to ear, she says, “See, I have trouble STAYING sub.”



He begins to stroke her cunt. “But you can’t Domme me baby.”



“You keep stroking like that and I wont even try.” She says as she catches her breath at the feel of him stroking her most private place.



“That's the general idea.” He says in a sexy low voice with a smirk on his face.



She leans back and sighs with pleasure and doesn’t say a word.



He continues to stroke her clit. Softly, then quickly, then a bit harder and back to softly.



She lets her legs fall wider.....and gives herself up to the sensation.



“I'm gonna make you cum, then I'm gonna fuck this pussy.” He whispers as he looks her right in the eyes.





Saying nothing....she looks up at you, lost in the sensation.......biting her lip.....unable to do anything but go with the flow.



He slides down her body so he can lick her pussy lips.



She moans and lets her hand run through your hair.



He rubs her clit with the pad of his thumb whilst licking and sucking and her lips and the inside of her thighs.



She moans and grips his hair.......pulling him in closer.



He smiles against her... and licks faster.



She moves her legs up to encircle him, holding him close.



“Good girl” he whispers loudly as he darts his tongue inside her.



She moans....having trouble breathing.



“I want to taste your come my little slut,” he says as he keeps licking and stroking her nub, faster and deeper.



She moans......then suddenly tugs on his hair and squeezes with her legs as she cums......and screams....”YESSSSSSSSSSSS!!!”



He licks her juices and calls up to her “Good girl.”



She moans and sighs....utterly relaxed...and grins up at him.



He moves up her body and slides his thick cock inside her in one forceful push.



She gasps slightly......at being filled so completely.



“Mmmm, tight.” He whispers.



She moves her hips...feeling wonderfully stuffed.



He rams deeper into her tight cunt.



“Mmmmmmm” she moans and thrusts upward to meet that lovely cock.



He fucks her harder, grunting with each thrust.



She meets each thrust....moaning.... “mmm yesssssssss!!”



”Mmmm I'm gonna cum.” He breathes in her ear.



She moans.....”Yes.......take me”.....and pulls him even tighter.



He thrusts down hard one last hard time and cums and cums inside her.”



“OH YESSSSSSSS!! She screams and cums as well.



He rests his head on her chest.



“Mmmmmmmmmm” is all she can manage at the moment.



He smiles the satisfied smile of a male and a Master.







COMMENTS

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ladygoddessaries
ladygoddessaries
04:01 Jan 23 2008

Hmm nicely done..





DeadAir
DeadAir
22:01 Apr 29 2008

Very Captivating in an Erotic kind of way! I would love to hear more of your writing.



Bites and Kisses My Friend,



The Daywalker








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